Turning in your two weeks notice can be terrifying__because no matter how well you think you know your supervisor, you can never be 100% sure of his or her reaction. Will he be furious and insist on walking you out the door immediately? Will she beg you to stay, enticing you with an enormous raise? Or will he be completely civil and wish you the best of luck?
These are vague... are you available to train a replacement anytime, even after your last day? Are you saying you'll be too busy to help prepare someone else or that you'll be busy helping with the transition? As with everything else in your resignation letter, clear and concise are the way to go.